oblivion is welcome (a poem)

[Manfred Rahim]

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if time permits, i shall try to write more poems.
here is my first:

you dont have to brood when the noose hangs ready and taut

you can slip it on and give up on all you fought

nothing is sweeter than jumping into the void so dark and vast

surely the ultimate step is the best cure for the past.

never fear that step, it’s so wonderfully bold

embrace oblivion, emptiness, and cold.

[harry]

On Tue, 7 Feb 2012 16:46:54 -0800 (PST), Manfred Rahim

Post by Manfred Rahim
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if time permits, i shall try to write more poems.
you dont have to brood when the noose hangs ready and taut
you can slip it on and give up on all you fought
nothing is sweeter than jumping into the void so dark and vast
surely the ultimate step is the best cure for the past.
never fear that step, it’s so wonderfully bold
embrace oblivion, emptiness, and cold.

if you had the guts to take the dive,

you wouldn't be here nor be alive.

instead, you'll bore me with your hypocrite rap,

filling my ears with your sissy crap.

so take your own advice and jump,

you boring, babbling, hypocrite chump.

[Brave Burger]

Post by harry
On Tue, 7 Feb 2012 16:46:54 -0800 (PST), Manfred Rahim

Post by Manfred Rahim
x-no-archive: yes
if time permits, i shall try to write more poems.
you dont have to brood when the noose hangs ready and taut
you can slip it on and give up on all you fought
nothing is sweeter than jumping into the void so dark and vast
surely the ultimate step is the best cure for the past.
never fear that step, it's so wonderfully bold
embrace oblivion, emptiness, and cold.

if you had the guts to take the dive,
you wouldn't be here nor be alive.
instead, you'll bore me with your hypocrite rap,
filling my ears with your sissy crap.
so take your own advice and jump,
you boring, babbling, hypocrite chump.

Nobody invited you here, so don't let the door
kick you in the ass while leaving, bye bye..

[Adam Lynn]

On Feb 7, 7:46 pm, Manfred Rahim <farewellpal.

Post by Manfred Rahim
x-no-archive: yes
if time permits, i shall try to write more poems.
you dont have to brood when the noose hangs ready and taut
you can slip it on and give up on all you fought
nothing is sweeter than jumping into the void so dark and vast
surely the ultimate step is the best cure for the past.
never fear that step, it’s so wonderfully bold
embrace oblivion, emptiness, and cold.

Do you need a hug? There.
Hope that helps. Now go
make a poem.

[hop]

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"Now go
make a poem. "

some of us struggle just to climb out of our lonely beds,
some of us have voices screaming in our heads,
we did not choose the life that conquered our souls,
we did not yearn to be torn apart between poles,
yet we stagger on, because we know nothing else and think we must
would not lashing out be right, proper, some say even just?


(end)

[humble.life]

Post by Manfred Rahim
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"Now go
make a poem. "
some of us struggle just to climb out of our lonely beds,
some of us have voices screaming in our heads,
we did not choose the life that conquered our souls,
we did not yearn to be torn apart between poles,
yet we stagger on, because we know nothing else and think we must
would not lashing out be right, proper, some say even just?
(end)

you win my vote

[jill]

Post by Manfred Rahim
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"Now go
make a poem. "
 some of us struggle just to climb out of our lonely beds,
some of us have voices screaming in our heads,
we did not choose the life that conquered our souls,
we did not yearn to be torn apart between poles,
yet we stagger on, because we know nothing else and think we must
would not lashing out be right, proper, some say even just?
(end)

lash out at who hop? that is the problem for me. All this free
floating resentment and misery and knowing it really isn't fair to
dump it on anybody even the people who contributed to it cuz they
really didn't mean it there was no intent , it is just such a mess
isn't it ,